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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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Well I hope like hell you are planning to finish this or continue this or something. You can't just leave me here!!!! Actually, I don't know what to
think right now. I love how this started. Surprised to see Sam but I kknow for certain she won't be a factor long.
However, I am torn. I don't want to encourage you with this because then that will delay Two Ships and The Wild Card which I check every day for an update by the way, 9 times out of 10 winding uop reading a few back chapters or just giving in and reading the whole story again. I think I may be able to recite without help the chapter where Elizabeth and Jason go out on the lake in the row boat and then it sinks. oh and in the wild card where he checks her wounded ankle as a ruse to put is hands on her calf. Okay, I give in.....I now beg for you to keep writing this. Oh and Fly Boy. There is so much more to write about that one. At least two or three more chapters to let us know what SHE has planned after their trip down. Although I must admit, I probably would have given the thumbs down just knowing what HE wanted to do. Okay, quit your job, put your kids in daycare, hire a housekeeper and divorce your husband.....just get back to writing, DAILY. LOL Just a desperate plea from a fan that is quickly becoming your biggest fan. I really like this story but it led me to believe he was in a different town. Is Elizabeth someone he doesn't know? Never met before? So many possibities here. Can't wait because I fell sure now I have convinced you!!!!! your fan, alikat, alikat224, alison |
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Alison! Yay! I'm so glad you are enjoying the stories! (and Yay! feedback!)
Okay, quit your job, put your kids in daycare, hire a housekeeper and divorce your husband.....just get back to writing, DAILY. LOLOooo.... don't tempt me... although my kids are both teens and probably wouldn't mind if I never bothered them again and my hubby just might take the offer seriously... but I digress.
Believe me it's just as frustrating for me to not write as fast as I'd like. I've got the whole story swimming around in my head begging to be put to paper and I wish I could do it faster. So I always and forever will be apologizing to everyone for being so slow.
I really like this story but it led me to believe he was in a different town. Is Elizabeth someone he doesn't know? Never met before? So many possibities here.Thank you! and yes, Jason is a different town and no, he's never met Elizabeth before. Also, this is another period piece, and I've got like 16th/17th century Scotland in mind ... for some reason the idea of Jason in a kilt has piqued my muse's interest.
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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Jason in a kilt. Other than Jason Quartermaine, have we ever seen his legs? I don't really think so unless you think about the time when he was shot in the
leg and even then we didn't really get to see much of his legs. I never even gathered that it was 16/17th century. Now I'll have to go back and read it
again. Your writing is very addicting. Kind of like a book you can re-read millions of times or your favorite movie you can watch over and over again. (Mine is
Speed, Steel Magnolias and as dumb as it sounds anything by Dr Seuss or Sidney Sheldon)
Well, I don't really want you to leave your husband. He may be your inspiration for the love and all. Again, you are such a good writer. I am honest when I say I have read start to finsih Two Ships at least three times that I can remember and count. Of course, now that you moved to Yuku I can't get your website on my cell'phone / pda. I can't get The Canvass either. I may have to upgrade. It just happened last week so I am not sure what the problem is. However, each evening, I come home and check TC and here. I understand about not writing too fast. If you write just to get something out there then it would not be as good. also, life tends to happen whether we are at a keyboard or not. I am sure you can't pay bills with Two Ships or The Wild Card. Yeah, keep the hubby !!!! Teenagers, huh? Wait till they are 21. That's no cakewalk either. My mother always said that you dont stop being a mom just because they are 18. SHE WAS RIGHT!!! Anyhoo, love your new site and I am wondering if by your last comment about being a period "PIECE" that maybe you are planning to pull it out of the completed and into the in progress. Whatever you write I am sure you will love. ta ta for now....going to read the 1st chapter (or should I call it a Prologue) for Reversal of Fortune. LOL ;-) then I'll probably go catch a few chapters of AGun ABride and a Baby....that's one I haven't read in awhile. |
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Jason in a kilt. Other than Jason Quartermaine, have we ever seen his legs? Well, I don't really want you to leave your husband. He may be your inspiration for the love and all.Nah, I'm not going to leave him, he's a good guy. (most of the time ) Anyhoo, love your new site and I am wondering if by your last comment about being a period "PIECE" that maybe you are planning to pull it out of the completed and into the in progress.I haven't given up the idea yet, but I promised myself not to seriously consider it until I finished the two I'm currently working on.
Last Edited By: crystalblueyes 04/10/08 1:43 PM.
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lovemyqtkids |
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The hook definitely worked. I'm a sucker for old English/Scottish stories. I hope you're able to finish this at some point...maybe I should be working
on my own stuff, too. Anyway, loved it!
...Angela...
"Recap Queen" so dubbed by Dana
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Your writing is excellent.I love your period pieces.. the wild card and two ships are wonderful. A break from the reality that is Liason. You capture and bring
out the strong Elizabeth that I miss and is so lacking in alot of other stories. But you keep to the characters which is amazing in itself. I'm right there
with the characters watching everything unfold... You are absolutely amazing.... And I'll be glued to reversal of fortune. Everytime you post another
chapter. I go back and read from chapter one. It's just that good...thanks for your great reads...
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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I read this again and seriously....this needs to be expanded.
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eyesonu67 |
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Are you just trying to tease us cause there is no way this story is over, you can't leave Jason like this the man has to at least fall madly in love with
Elizabeth, push her away and then fight like hell to get her back. Come on we all know that this is how any good story of Liz and Jason goes.
First finish Two Ships and then please continue with this story. I want to take the journey with you as you introduce us all to another one of your mind blowing stories.
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crystalblueyes |
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This story has definitely been bugging me to be finished. I just don't know when I'm going to get to it.
I've made a promise to myself that I'm not going to come up with any more story ideas until I finish the ones I've already started. |
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jasonghliz1999.thecanvasmessag... |
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I am so hoping that you will strat this one. Loved Two Shipes and Wild Card.
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crystalblueyes |
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Sweet! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I haven't given up the idea of finishing this one.
In fact, it's one of the choices for the 100 member celebration! |
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coley179 |
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Yes, Please finish this one!
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lovingjasandliz.liasonroadtonow... |
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And with the final words of that last update this story just got VERY interesting..Hope u keep it going..Loved it
~Patti ~
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ghliasonfan.liasonroadtonow... |
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Now this is interesting, Didn't see that coming. Elizabeth being his daughter. So what will Jason do, how will he react to finding this out??? Great
update, can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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CHARLOTTE35 |
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So good! Thank You
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Starhine |
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I hope you continue this story I find it very intriguing. I like the twist of Elizabeth being an Alcarzar and what this knowledge will do to help fight
Alcarzar.
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xol77.thecanvasmessag... |
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Wow I sooo did not see that coming either! I want to know more about how it came about that she would turn on her father and why he would kill her husband. I
also want to know the story behind Jason and Sam. Please update soon!
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coley179 |
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WHAT! Wow I really didn't call that one! I had no clue! So her father killed her husband, and doesn't care about her, and she wants him stopped as in
dead?! WOW, Shocker! This is going to be a great story. I love that Cam is in the story as well. It will be interesting how you get into the details of
Liz's past with her father. I am anxious to know what is going on in that situation! I can't wait for more!
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I can't seem to break away from the historical fic can I? lol I think I must be crazy. Well, I know I'm crazy, so there's the
explanation right there. Now, how many stories do I have waiting to be written? Too many...
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skyler27.thecanvasmessag... |
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I didnot expect Elizabeth being Alcazar's daughter. Nice twist. I can't wait to see where this story is going. Hope you update this sometime!
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