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crystalblueyes |
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If you would be gracious enough, please respond with your feelings about the story.
Last Edited By: crystalblueyes 05/28/09 11:19 AM.
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Liason4ever79 |
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Please, Please, Please!!! Update soon! I miss this fic.
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crystalblueyes |
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Sorry for being such a slowpoke, but I can tell you that this story
will be the next one updated. I'm hoping this weekend. *crosses fingers*
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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okay..just re-read last chapter....i so love this story. can't wait for more.
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Lovable Me |
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I also just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story, and love the new board
Can't wait for another update!!! |
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crystalblueyes |
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So, obviously I didn't get the new chapter posted this last weekend. And I thought crossing my fingers would help.
Chapter 15 is thisclose to being finished. Hopefully if life doesn't pull me away I should have it up... any day now. Soon. Really. I mean it this time. :| |
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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okay, just your acknowledgement that it's coming makes me feel better. I just love you~~~~~~!!!! Awwwww...okay, I don't know you but I love your
stories.
anymore thoughts on fly boy or that other one (why do I forget that name every darned time?) Okay, no...do't do those without finishing Two Ships and then The Wild Card. (ohhhh.....rain and a scavenger hunt...I wonder what Jason will be hunting LOL!!!) okay, okay, okay....I know you think I am stalking you. (and I am!!!!) but I check here every day and one day soon.....I know I'll see the next chapter of Two Ships...the duel at dawn...eeeeekkkk. |
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I nearly jumped out of my skin when I saw the update. I was in the warehouse at work smoking a cigarette and goofin on my phone/pda and thought...maybe... My warehousemen think I am flippin nuts. That was the best duel. You must have had to do a lot of research for that. Oh boy, I love me some Stefan. (I wish I had watched back then) Nikolas is such a rat ***tard. I am so happy that Jason got by with just a little scratch. (although I did kind of think he would get hurt just enough for Elizabeth to have to take care of him....I know, I know this is AU not AR.) Make Love to ME!!!! Woah Elizabeth...you brazen hussy !!!!! I love it. And for Jason not to tell her to stop but to plead with her to tell him to.....*swoon***** OH, I get all my websites on my phone again. Are you not going to post on the Canvas anymore? I understand many have problems there now. It doesn't matter to me, I hit your site darn near daily anyway (especially in the past two weeks waiting for this last chapter.) Okay, Okay, no how are you going to be able to figure out how to make Jason and Elizabeth be able to be together. Oh, he's such a bad boy and she's such a titled woman (is that the right word?) Somehow, they have to end up together. You know, I should have never started reading this blasted story until you wrote the last chapter because now I am going to have to wait for more. (I promise to try to be patient.....oh who am I kidding. GET TO WORK WOMAN!!! lol...just kidding.) The next chapter will be so great!!!! I hope he doesn't tell her no but knowing you, I'll never guess what happens. I am unable to predict your story thoughts. However, I can imagine. Yet, the imagination never is as good as your actual chapters. I honestly thought that Elizabeth would be at the duel....and as I said before, I thought Jason would win (of course) but thought he would get hurt worse and she'd have to take care of him. YOURS WAS MUCH MUCH BETTER !!! Okay, I am sooooooooooo happy now. I will not be getting any work done this afternoon. Oh well, it's friday. Ummmm....when's the scavenger hunt? just wondering....really no rush !!!!! ;-) Edited to remove some of the E-s (so I could read your response without shifting the page back and forth) lol. I love your excitement though! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! R
Last Edited By: crystalblueyes 04/25/08 3:41 PM.
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Lovable Me |
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That was so well worth the wait.. It was amazing and thank you so much for the latest update!!! I can't wait for more!
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nerson |
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And yet even now he knew this was wrong. Yes, he wanted her. He ached for her, but he couldn't have her. Not now, not ever. If he took what he desired, Elizabeth would be ruined. Yet every last inch of him craved her. Not just for today. He wanted her with him always. Yet he couldn't have her. He didn't want to stop, but, if he didn't, he'd never forgive himself for irreparably destroying Elizabeth's life.I floved that part, well, ok I actually floved the whole thing but that part especially. *sighs* Absolutely wonderful. Jennifer
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Number1GHfan.thecanvasmessag... |
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EEEEEE!!!!!
i am sooo happy that jason found liz! i wonder how stefan found out about jason being captain morgan?? I LOVED IT!!!! and i am sooo happy that she said told him to make love to her .....lets just hope that johnny doesn't barge in...lol
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CHARLOTTE35 |
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Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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Okay, I have been thinking about this. What if he really had been taken away? What if he didn't leave her but was taken from her? Who would have
taken him? Why would he leave her if it was by his own choosing? The only explanation was if he were doing something to make himself a legitimate person so
that he could claim her withouse shaming her and her family. However, that doesn't seem like a possible task. Yet, what if he were going to his father,
his real father to request a title and heritage he could bestow upon Elizabeth. Is that even plausible in that era? However, if he were taken away, by the
sherriff or something of that lot, maybe in that day and age, there was no getting out. Obviously it's not likely they had internet or CNN to let her know
what happened in another town.
Love the story and can't wait for an update. Get ready for the stalk to resume !!! |
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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Okay, I have been thinking about this. What if he really had been taken away? What if he didn't leave her but was taken from her? Who would have
taken him? Why would he leave her if it was by his own choosing? The only explanation was if he were doing something to make himself a legitimate person so
that he could claim her withouse shaming her and her family. However, that doesn't seem like a possible task. Yet, what if he were going to his father,
his real father to request a title and heritage he could bestow upon Elizabeth. Is that even plausible in that era? However, if he were taken away, by the
sherriff or something of that lot, maybe in that day and age, there was no getting out. Obviously it's not likely they had internet or CNN to let her know
what happened in another town.
Love the story and can't wait for an update. Get ready for the stalk to resume !!! |
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kmercier86.thecanvasmessag... |
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I am a huge fan of your works and this story is one of my favorites and I can't wait for more. Great story.
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calicat05 |
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I've really been enjoying this story. I can't imagine why Jason abandoned Elizabeth. Their love scene was so beautiful. He seemed so tender and
loving. But, to leave and not contact her for months, really does make him seem like a cad. Patrick is wonderful to offer to provide for Elizabeth and to
save her honor. But, it came out of left field. Did he have something to do with Jason's disappearance? I'm eagerly awaiting your next update.
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Phillymom65 |
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Love this story...Can we please, p lease, please get an update soon...I think I'm going thru withdrawal...I can't begin to assume what is going on with
Jason...I don't want to dwell on the what ifs, I just want to read about it...Hope to see something soon...
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eyesonu67 |
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I totally love this story. Pleeeease update soon!!!
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alikat224.thecanvasmessag... |
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It's time to start the lurking and begging and pleading and ......okay, ready for a new chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Amlaren |
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It is time to start stalking.... please don't let Elizabeth marry Patrick cuz it is proper!!!
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crystalblueyes |
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Sorry it's taking me so long to get the next chapter done. After Chapter 16 my muse decided she needed a vacation, so she packed her grip and took off
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