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Posts: 35 03/21/09 10:41 PM |
Rebecca that is funny, our sale is ended and I am so happy. Our troop made $1200.00 but I feel like I worked extra hard this year for that money. Can't
wait to hear what jason has to say about Elizabeth being pregnant.
Thanks, Sandra
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Posts: 357 03/23/09 11:50 AM |
Hey Sandra!
 Another cookie mom!
My daughter is a teen and the teens don't sell nearly as many as the younger kids do. Which I'm grateful for, but I'll still be happy when
it's over.
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coley179 |
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Posts: 73 03/23/09 1:25 PM |
I know that you will make the chapter worth waiting for...and another chapter of the Quest, maybe? That would be awesome!
I always say that things suck donkey balls, but now with my kids getting older I find that they repeat. Somehow it is not as cute when your 5 year old says it at school and gets in trouble! It is nice to know someone else out there says it too. My husband always thought that I was crazy. |
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pinklady34.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 7 03/25/09 12:08 AM |
well i am glad to read that you are trying to update this story i keep coming to check if there has been an update out yet but i understand that you don't
want to just give us anything to read...i admire that. so take your time and will wait for the update. thanks for story it totally rocks!
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 38 04/05/09 3:54 PM |
I just re-read this story from beginning to most recent update. I was going to post here to beg, plead, annoy, bribe whatever it takes to get you to update,
but after seeing your post that you are working on it, I will no longer do anything but say thank you for still working on this. Also I will send good vibes
and wishes that you are able to make the chapter work. You are such a fabulous writer, you haven' written anything that I haven't absolutely loved, so
I will patiently wait for you to get the chapter how you want it and still be grateful that not only are you still working on this, the first Liason fanfic
story I ever read (that also got me addicted to fanfic) but you continue to work on your other stories as well. I just love vampire Jason he, he, he.
Good luck and thanks again. |
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crystalblueyes |
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Posts: 357 04/06/09 11:21 AM |
Hello all!
I'm back with more good news/bad news. 
The good news is that I've sent my revised Chapter 27 to my beta and she hasn't immediately told me that it sucks, so I'm hoping I did better this go around. 
The bad news is that this week is the girls spring break and we are headed out on vacation! (and the weather at the beach is only supposed to be in the 50's  Yay for my luck...) So I won't be able to post
anything until after Easter.
Here's wishing everyone a great week!
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coley179 |
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Posts: 73 04/07/09 4:37 PM |
Have a great vacation...looking forward to your return and a possible update! Thanks for keeping us informed!
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crystalblueyes |
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Posts: 357 04/14/09 11:48 PM |
Well, I finally did it.
Chapter 27 is done. I have no clue why this chapter was so hard to write but it totally and completely kicked my butt.  Actually I wrote it twice. The first draft was simply too horrendous to edit
so I just started over. Which is part of why it took so long.
Hopefully it won't disappoint you as badly as it does me. Sigh.. I'm much too hard on myself. Now off to work on the next chapter! 
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 38 04/15/09 1:26 AM |
You are entirely too hard on yourself. Course you are such a good writer, you demand perfection of yourself. As a fan of both you and this story, let me be the
first (not counting anything your beta said) to say that this chapter was worth the wait. It finished explaining exactly why no word was sent to Liz, it made
it even better that he tried to go back to her the second he could and that when he found out she was gone he actively tried to find her...even seeking out
Drake. Then, of course, there's my favorite sappy part. It kind of explained his motivation for not just spilling his guts to her the second he saw her and
ended of course with the declaration of love, the feeling of the baby kick and the proposal. OK you know all of that...I'm just stating what I loved about
it
You did good. I'm doing the happy dance, I've been waiting so long for this chapter...lol. Anxiously waiting for the next one, hope it goes better for you. |
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Posts: 5 04/15/09 8:44 AM |
This chapter was so worth the wait... Stop being your own worst critic. You're an exceptional writer. Everything you've written still holds the basic
quality that is Liason.Writing them in AU/AR is just a perk for me.I love Liason in different eras and universes. That to me is what makes the difference
between a good writer and an exceptional writer, to be able to write them in a completely different time period, and still keep that quality in Jason and
Elizabeth. Awesome. I am also just giddy with delight for this chapter. Absolutely love this story as much as I do every one you've written... Look forward
to future updates, and stories.... flo
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pinklady34.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 7 04/15/09 10:40 AM |
that was well worth the wait. love how jason told her what happened, him looking for her, trying to get information, and professing his love for her. but
what a cliffhanger! i really hope she says yes. please don't wait to update.
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coley179 |
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Posts: 73 04/15/09 1:54 PM |
Oh wow what an update! I knew you would do an awesome job with the chapter! I love how Elizabeth traced his scars. I like how Patrick would not tell him about
Liz, untill he saw the scars, and even then he did not tell all of Liz's secrets. I love how Jason was so intent upon finding her and keeping her safe. I
hate that he had to be tortured, but I guess that is the only way he stays out of trouble for not coming for her. I love how he professed his love several time
so that she would know that he loved her. The scene with them both feeling the baby move was so wonderful. Okay so I think that I just summed up the entire
chapter, but it was so fantastic, that I had to tell you all of my favorite parts! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Posts: 4 04/15/09 2:17 PM |
I haven't left feedback for this ever, but it's one of my favorite stories ever. This last chapter was just so darn superb. I realized I'd gotten
behind a little bit which was exciting because I had a few chapters to read at once.
This last one was so vivid - their emotions, Elizabeth touching his scares, their raw honesty. Lovelovelovelove it. I love how Jason told her everything, how in an instant they seemed to close that space between them, and how he loves her and touched the baby - Geez. I just cannot say enough good things. A proposal! Seriously! *squeals* This will keep me happy for the rest of the day, I'm sure. |
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Posts: 4 04/15/09 7:46 PM |
Beautiful. Absolutely loved it.
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ghlover0508 |
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Posts: 13 04/29/09 1:04 AM |
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kiki moo |
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Posts: 35 04/29/09 1:15 AM |
I was always someone who didn't like period pieces and then I read 'Two Ships' and fell for this fic like you do for your first love. Thank you
Rebecca for a truly romantic and adventurous story. The ending was perfect for Jason and Elizabeth, after all they went through, they now have the perfect
family and the perfect love. I have to say I will definitely miss this story but it will become one of those fics that I read over and over again. Sandra
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 38 04/29/09 4:52 AM |
Rebecca, imagine me giving you a standing ovation. I don't know if I"ve mentioned this before but this is the story that really brought me into the
world of fanfic, especially Liason fanfic. I found Canvas by accident and read a couple of stories and they were fine, but then I saw this one and the second I
read what you had done to that point (5/08 - I think to that point we were waiting for the duel) I was hooked, after that began my journey into reading all the
fics at that sigth, then finding all the fanfic I could find, but this has always been the standout to me and has always held a special place in my heart.
I'm almost sad it's finally finished...lol.
Not quite because you still have other fabulous stories you are writing and for me to re-read at this website. You really are one of my all time favorite fanfic authors. Anyway, love the ending and that they had twins. Love that Jason retired and they are living happily in Italy, of course and you even brough Bobbie into the story. Just loved everything about it. PERFECT. |
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shetalks2angels2.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 6 04/29/09 10:34 AM |
I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job with it. I can't wait to read what you have coming next.
Tricia
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Posts: 3 04/29/09 11:55 AM |
Hi Rebecca!
I don't usually come on here and comment, but upon a momentous occasion such as the completion of Two Ships, I had to make an exception. I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this entire story. Two Ships is a true epic of romance and adventure! Thanks for sharing your talent with us. You soooo ROCK! Mundi
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pinklady34.thecanvasmessag... |
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Posts: 7 04/29/09 4:30 PM |
that was an awesome ride and i absolutely love all your stories. i am sorry to see this story go but i will definitely keep an eye out on any other stories
you might start or update. i just love your writing. i still can't believe that they had TWINS!!! THAT IS JUST FANTASTIC BOY AND A GIRL! great job!
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I have no clue why this chapter is giving me so many
fits and I'm sorry its taking so long, but I don't want to put out something just to put it out and have it be crap. 
I am truly on cloud 9...what a
beautiful ending to one of my very favorite stories...twins...perfect! I love that you had them get married right away...they had waisted enough time being
apart. Now they live in Italy with their children and live happily ever after.
