I really liked this and hope that you decide to continue. Jason's already smitten and I think that not only would Lila love her but I think it might make
her feel well enough to stick around for the wedding. 
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Read it again. I don't know whether I love you more because you are such a good writer or more because you like to write period pieces.
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Posts: 74 09/09/09 9:53 AM |
I read it over and over and I really would love this to be continued, but I also like it as a oneshot...it just requires me to actually use my imagination to
determine what happens next!
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Posts: 22 09/16/09 2:57 AM |
have we convinced you to move this story to the "in progress" section? PLEASE?
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Yes Rebecca, we'd like to read more.
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Posts: 1 10/20/09 1:55 PM |
what's next
Last Edited By: cherr123 10/20/09 2:06 PM.
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Posts: 358 11/05/09 11:14 PM |
So.... I'm getting a sense that you'd like to read more of this one? hmmm.... ponders the possibilities... Yikes! The entire Quartermaine clan! I
really set myself up for a pretty big challenge haven't I?
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