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lesluvsliason.thecanvasmessag...		#61	[url]	[-]
Posts: 14 09/21/08 3:56 PM	Oooh! Perfect chapter! Thank you. What is our Captain hiding from his Lady? We know her secret, but what is his? And who discovers Elizabeth's secret first? She is not going to be able to hide the evidence of their love much longer. I hope Jason is the last to know about the baby. He deserves to suffer more because of his stupid "Hero" complex of his. I just want to scream at him to quit protecting everyone and let them lead their own lives! ARRRRRGGGGHHHH! Poor Dillon and Johnny and all the other mates on the boat. I fear they will become collateral damage in the war between J&E. Keep going. Can't wait for more.
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JackFan143		#62	[url]	[-]
Posts: 6 09/25/08 10:01 PM	crystalblueyes wrote: Thank you Alison, but I have to admit that Jackfan has legitimate points. I do update slowly and the story does lose momentum. It's something I apologize for repeatedly. Unfortunately, as much as I'd love to, I can't spend my days writing fan fic. Too much real life going on (as I'm sure is true of us all). My main writing time is that hour or so between the time my kids go to bed and when I get too tired to think. Often I'm too tired to think even before my kids go to bed. lol... so yeah, I'm slow. Apologies and huge thank you's to everyone for your patience. I guess should admit to another reason I'm so slow. Since I do only post roughly once a month, I want to make sure the chapters are not horrific when I do post them. So I spend a little extra time editing to try to make sure that the story is the best that I can make it. I'd hate to have everyone waiting and put out a chapter of schlock. Ah well. All I can do is my best. Which may or may not be good enough, but it's all I can do. Jackfan, I do apologize and you are more than welcome to come back when the story is finished and read it from the beginning straight through to the end. Thank you for understanding what I was saying and I will be back when its finished because your writing is awesome. Last Edited By: JackFan143 09/25/08 10:05 PM. Edited 1 time.
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag...		#63	[url]	[-]
Posts: 38 09/26/08 2:59 AM	please keep the updates coming. I know Johnny wants Jason to tell Liz that he loves her and Jason thinks she's too good for his life...I just wish he'd figure out she's pregnant, with his upbringing he'd never let her go on to be a single mother like his was! Man this has been a favorite of mine since I first discovered liason fanfic last April
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jestersqueen		#64	[url]	[-]
Posts: 4 09/26/08 10:03 PM	AAAAH!! Rebecca. I gave into temptation and read this story, knowing it wasn't finished and now I am dying. Excellent story. It is truly one of the best written fan fictions I have read ( and that is a lot of fan fiction). I will eagerly be awaiting more. Check out the Liason fanfic index at Liason Fan Fic Index. Are you an author that would like to be included in the index? PM me and let me know where to find your stories. Special thanks to Tigg for the avatar and duckydawn2 for the beautiful banner.
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coley179		#65	[url]	[-]
Posts: 71 10/06/08 6:53 PM	I need my fix...please update soon! Thank you!
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jaslizaddict.thecanvasmessag...		#66	[url]	[-]
Posts: 9 10/11/08 5:53 PM	I'm with Coley179 on this one...this is such a good story that we are craving it badly!!!!!
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coley179		#67	[url]	[-]
Posts: 71 10/16/08 4:05 PM	ohhh an update! I want to know what does Jason have and when is he going to see her next...when is she going to tell him? so many questions...at least she is becoming more trusting with Dillon and more comfortable around him. This story is so good! Keep it coming!
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jaslizaddict.thecanvasmessag...		#68	[url]	[-]
Posts: 9 10/16/08 7:29 PM	OH, THANK YOU!!! Now, I am left wondering what is that item Johnny has? When are Jason and Elizabeth going to talk? It has been too long, too much needs to be said and again I am begging for more!!!!
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag...		#69	[url]	[-]
Posts: 38 10/20/08 2:16 AM	the plot thickens. I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for more. Darn stubborn Jason and Liz!! I must say Gh has me about sick of Jason making decisions best for Elizabeth...darn, upstanding man! But I sure love him, you've pegged his sense of honor and self sacrifice
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jandl2007		#70	[url]	[-]
Posts: 3 10/21/08 11:12 PM	I love Jason and I love Elizabeth but why do they both have to be so stubborn! (It's not your fault just the way they are.) I am thinking Jason does have a good reason for leaving her I just wish he would have left word. Maybe he did and it didn't get delivered? I know their story is full of angst but I sure hope Elizabeth doesn't keep his child away from him in this story. I still hate that I have to sit through that on GH. As always I look forward to your updates and I love your stories!! Liason therapy is, oh, so very good!! Proud Spin's Squad Member #2 The Jackal's Protectors
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jaslizaddict.thecanvasmessag...		#71	[url]	[-]
Posts: 9 11/05/08 8:38 PM	Just lurking around for a new installment of Two Ships and of course The Wild Card.
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crystalblueyes		#72	[url]	[-]
Posts: 354 11/05/08 8:45 PM	I have sent the next chapter to my beta, hopefully the wait won't be too much longer.
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coley179		#73	[url]	[-]
Posts: 71 11/06/08 12:09 AM	Hurry beta hurry...I need my fix!
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jaslizaddict.thecanvasmessag...		#74	[url]	[-]
Posts: 9 11/10/08 11:56 PM	I am so happy...for the update. I loved it and yet pissed because of those two. How is he going to take her to her parents and how is she going to hide the bump? Questions that are needing to be answered, soon very very soon. Because I'm going to be lurking and sulking and then lurking some more
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coley179		#75	[url]	[-]
Posts: 71 11/11/08 1:09 PM	You are killing me...oh the angst that is Jason and Elizabeth. I can't take it much longer! I was so glad to see an update and yet so disappointed to see that these two still can't get it together. This is like pride and prejudice all over again! They are both to stubborn to admit how they feel and what actuallly happened to them! Thank you so much for the update it was wonderful, can't wait for more!
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lesluvsliason.thecanvasmessag...		#76	[url]	[-]
Posts: 14 11/11/08 2:42 PM	Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you for an update. Damn you do like the angst! I love that she was honest with him without revealing the whole truth. I hope that everyone finds out about her delicate condition before Jason. I want him to be the last to know, the lug-head! Please don't keep us waiting so long the next time. We can't handle the waiting and the angst.
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LiasonBlazeOn.thecanvasmessag...		#77	[url]	[-]
Posts: 17 11/15/08 9:09 PM	Arrgghhh!! Those stubborn knuckleheads! I love 'em! He wants her to be pregnant ... she is pregnant ... they love each other ... neither knows it ... The angst is killing me! I need more as soon as possible. teehee. Keep up the great work. The story is awesome!
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pwrmom2.thecanvasmessag...	love this	#78	[url]	[-]
Posts: 38 11/17/08 5:58 AM	I'm so glad you finally updated this story again. I have really missed it. I love that Jason is subconciously trying to show Liz he cares (even though he says he needs her to hate him). I love that he's going to be there to get her safely to India...can't wait until he realizes she's pregnant. Also I hope Liz lets down her pride a little to tell him before he finds out on his own. She needs to just really let loose tell him off about how much he hurt her when he left and how in love with him she was before he finds out about the baby!
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coley179		#79	[url]	[-]
Posts: 71 12/01/08 6:37 PM	Just lurking around hoping for an update...I am having withdrawls
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lesluvsliason.thecanvasmessag...		#80	[url]	[-]
Posts: 14 12/07/08 6:16 PM	Oh, thank you so much. I love that she enjoyed torturing him so much. Serves him right. He deserves so much more. I am on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens next. Will Dillon find out her secret while they are in port or will it be Johnny? I don't know who I want to share her burden more. I think maybe Johnny since he is the only one who truly understands their relationship from both sides. He needs to feel the pain of carrying her secret and his. Way to go. I am so hooked on this story. I hope you are inspired soon.
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